रविवार, 18 जुलाई 2010

नवगीत / दोहा गीत : बरसो राम धडाके से... संजीव वर्मा 'सलिल'

नवगीत / दोहा गीत :

बरसो राम धडाके से...

संजीव वर्मा 'सलिल'
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बरसो राम धड़ाके से,
मरे न दुनिया फाके से....
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लोकतंत्र की जमीं पर,
लोभतंत्र के पैर.
अंगद जैसे जम गए-
अब कैसे हो खैर?.

 अपनेपन की आड़ ले,
भुना रहे हैं बैर.
देश पड़ोसी मगर बन-
कहें मछरिया तैर..

मारो इन्हें कड़ाके से,
बरसो राम धड़ाके से,
मरे न दुनिया फाके से....
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कर विनाश मिल, कह रहे,
बेहद हुआ विकास.
तम की का आराधना-
उल्लू कहें उजास..

भाँग कुंए में घोलकर,
बुझा रहे हैं प्यास.
दाल दल रहे आम की-
छाती पर कुछ खास..

पिंड छुड़ाओ डाके से,
बरसो राम धड़ाके से,
मरे न दुनिया फाके से....
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मगरमच्छ अफसर मुए,
व्यापारी घड़ियाल.
नेता गर्दभ रेंकते-
ओढ़ शेर की खाल.

देखो लंगड़े नाचते,
लूले देते ताल.
बहरे शीश हिला रहे-
.गूँगे करें सवाल..

चोरी होती नाके से,
बरसो राम धड़ाके से,
मरे न दुनिया फाके से....
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-- सलिल.संजीव@जीमेल.कॉम
दिव्यनर्मदा.ब्लॉगस्पोट.कॉम

Acharya Sanjiv Salil

http://divyanarmada.blogspot.com

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